Teacher feedback

Cover page-

• Artist needs to look at audience rather than looking to the side
• The information about the magazine e.g. price, issue and date needs to be smaller
• I need to move around the proportions of the magazine to make the text look realistic and more professional
• Barcode needs to be slightly bigger
• Make the artist's name a feature, bigger than quote

Contents page-

• Too much blank space
• Information about the magazine is too big
• Could use three images to make it look neat/more professional
• Title and page numbers are too big

Double page-

• Use the double page layout seen below
• Need to make the middle margins larger so text wont be lost in gutter
• State author of article/image
• Could include pull quote with image to make more interesting
• Use smaller text
• Margins need to be the same between columns