Audience feedback

1) The double page the bottom half of the image is quite dark so the artist's outfit is not clear against background. Also, the text on the front cover needs to contrast against photo so it stands out more and is easier to see. Could use a brighter photo.

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3) The title isn't very eye-catching as it blends into the border of the image. The font proportion between headers/sub-headers is good.

4) The artist should be styled to fit with the theme, clothes/make-up etc, consider mise en scene, Could use different outfits/shots on other pages to make each image unique and different. Also, the lighting on the pictures are very dark.

5) The layout of the columns on the double page spread are uneven and so do not look professional. Make them the same length and in the same position to improve neatness. Good use of colour to match the artist's clothes but could use similar colours used on contents/cover in new photos to link pages together. 

6) I like how the coloured rectangles are used on the contents page to break up the information but they need to be exactly the same size and aligned similar to the images. There isn't much information on the contents page about the magazine, add more pages.