Excellent work so far Charlotte. You've completed every task to a very high standard - I'm impressed. I really like the way you have been explaining all the different elements you have chosen to include on your blog. Well done.
Charlotte, I like the name that you have chosen for your magazine as it relates to music and will catch the eye of the reader. I also like how you have aimed it at students as they are the main reader of this genre of magazine. I think that the small price of £2.99 will appeal to most readers. To improve, is there any way of making it appeal to both genders as this would bring in a larger audience?
Excellent work so far Charlotte. You've completed every task to a very high standard - I'm impressed. I really like the way you have been explaining all the different elements you have chosen to include on your blog. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMake sure you label all your blog posts in an appropriate fashion. Look at the example blogs for guidance.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I have added the appropriate labels.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte, I like the name that you have chosen for your magazine as it relates to music and will catch the eye of the reader. I also like how you have aimed it at students as they are the main reader of this genre of magazine. I think that the small price of £2.99 will appeal to most readers. To improve, is there any way of making it appeal to both genders as this would bring in a larger audience?
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments Louis, I have considered your point and included it in my class feedback.
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